Course Overview
Overview
You’re mid-draft. The pacing is off. You can feel it — the chapters drag, the scenes overstay, the energy collapses somewhere in act two. Six weeks of practical pacing work at three scales: scene-level (within scenes), chapter-level (across scenes), and act-level (across the whole draft). We give you tools to FEEL pace in your own draft — the read-aloud test, the scene economy audit, the cut-line drill — and the mechanics to fix what you find. By the end your draft moves. Six weeks. Thirty lessons. The deliverable is a faster draft. The reader’s pulse is the metric.
What’s inside
- 6 modules, 30 lessons + pacing templates — practical, three-scale, draft-applicable immediately
- Mindset Maven Test that names YOUR specific pace-flattening pattern
- 6 guided meditations averaging 10 minutes — paired to read-aloud and audit sessions
- Toolkit: the Three-Scale Pacing Audit + the Scene Economy Worksheet
- Lifetime access, unlimited retakes — every draft has new pacing problems
- Companion blog post per module — public, perfect for the writer at 60% with the pacing dying
Who this is for
- The screenwriter whose act two reads twice as long as it actually is
- The playwright whose scenes all hit the same length and same energy
- The novelist whose chapters are ‘fine individually’ and ‘somehow drag in sequence’
- The short story writer whose pieces are technically tight but feel slow at the read-aloud test
FAQs
Will this work for short fiction?
Mostly. The first two modules are directly applicable to short forms. Modules 3-5 are weighted toward longer forms; you can adapt them for short fiction with some thinking. If you’re a short fiction writer specifically, expect to do that adaptation work.
Is this the same pacing covered in BM-106 (Sagging Middle Rescue)?
Same principles, expanded. BM-106 covers pacing as part of a broader middle-rescue course; this course is six weeks specifically on pacing at three scales.
Does this work for interactive / non-linear narrative?
Yes — Module 2 covers the IF / game adaptation explicitly. The three-scale framework maps cleanly to scene-level, branch-level, and route-level pacing.
How will I know my pace is better?
Module 6 covers the reader’s-pulse test — a specific protocol for measuring whether the draft’s pace lands. The test is the metric.
What’s the ‘cut-line drill’?
A practice in module 3 where you cut every line that doesn’t earn its place in a scene. Most writers cut 30-40% of a scene on first pass. The drill is the load-bearing skill of pacing work.
Can I retake?
Yes. Unlimited. Every draft develops new pacing problems.
What one student said
★★★★☆
“Honest review: I bought this for short story pacing and the course material is weighted toward novel-and-screenplay pacing. The first two modules are still useful for short form (the read-aloud test, the scene economy audit), but I had to adapt modules 3-5 for stories under 8,000 words. Worked, but it took some thinking. Four stars because I want short-story-specific writers to know what to expect. The core pacing skills are still the best material I’ve found on this craft level.”
— Hilde N., short story writer (took it for short fiction)
Curriculum
- 6 Sections
- 24 Lessons
- Lifetime
- Module 1: The Read-Aloud Test (Your Most Honest Pacing Diagnostic)Week one installs the read-aloud test. You read your draft aloud — actually aloud, with your voice — and pay attention to where energy drops, where you stumble, where you start skimming silently. The6
- 1.1Module 1: Overview20
- 1.2Mindset Maven Test: What Will YOU Most Resist About Reading Aloud?2 Questions
- 1.3Meditation: The Read-Aloud Audio (Use Before Each Read-Aloud Session)10
- 1.4Writing Prompt: Module 130
- 1.5INSPIRATION: The Chapter I Was Sure Was Tight Until I Read It Aloud15
- 1.6Companion Blog: Read Your Draft Aloud. It Is the Most Honest Pacing Diagnostic You’ll Ever Use.10
- Module 2: Scene Economy (the Cut-Line Drill at Scene Level)Week two installs scene economy. Every scene has lines that earn their place and lines that don't. The cut-line drill: go through one scene line by line and ask, of each line, 'does this earn its plac6
- 2.1Module 2: Overview20
- 2.2Mindset Maven Test: Which Resistance Will Slow YOUR Cut-Line Drill?2 Questions
- 2.3Meditation: The Cut-Line Drill Audio (Use Per Scene)12
- 2.4Writing Prompt: Module 230
- 2.5INSPIRATION: The Scene I Cut by 40% (and the Way the Reader’s Pulse Changed)15
- 2.6Companion Blog: Run the Cut-Line Drill on One Scene. Watch What Happens to the Pace.10
- Module 3: Chapter-Level Pacing (Sequence, Escalation, Breath Points)Week three moves up the scale to chapters. We cover sequence — the order of scenes within a chapter and how that order shapes pace. Escalation — the way pace builds across a chapter. Breath points — t6
- 3.1Module 3: Overview20
- 3.2Mindset Maven Test: Which Chapter-Level Tool Are YOU Underusing?2 Questions
- 3.3Meditation: The Chapter-Shape Audio (Use Before Chapter Pacing Work)11
- 3.4Writing Prompt: Module 330
- 3.5INSPIRATION: The Chapter I Re-Sequenced and Suddenly Worked15
- 3.6Companion Blog: Chapters Have Their Own Pacing. Sequence, Escalation, and Breath Points Are the Three Tools.10
- Module 4: Act-Level Pacing (the Macro Shape of the Draft)Week four moves to act-level. We cover macro pacing — the shape across the whole draft, the act-to-act energy distribution, the midpoint trap (where most drafts collapse), the climax pacing, and the d6
- 4.1Module 4: Overview20
- 4.2Mindset Maven Test: Where Does YOUR Draft Collapse at the Act Level?2 Questions
- 4.3Meditation: The Macro-View Audio (Use Once for the Whole-Draft Audit)13
- 4.4Writing Prompt: Module 430
- 4.5INSPIRATION: The Draft That Worked Scene-by-Scene and Failed at the Act Level (and the Macro Fix That Saved It)15
- 4.6Companion Blog: Your Draft Has a Macro Shape. Most Writers Never Audit It.10
- Module 5: Voice-Pace Interaction (When Voice Choices Affect Pace)Week five is the nuance week. Voice and pace interact. Long sentences slow pace; short sentences speed it. First person narrows narrative distance; third person widens it. Tense choice matters. Dictio6
- 5.1Module 5: Overview20
- 5.2Mindset Maven Test: Which Voice Element Is Currently Killing YOUR Pace?2 Questions
- 5.3Meditation: The Voice-Pace Calibration Audio11
- 5.4Writing Prompt: Module 530
- 5.5INSPIRATION: The Year I Tried to Fix the Pace by Shortening Sentences (and Lost My Voice for Two Drafts)15
- 5.6Companion Blog: Most Pacing Advice Assumes Voice Is Fixed. It Isn’t. Here’s the Interaction.10
- Module 6: The Reader's Pulse Test (the Capstone Diagnostic)Final week. The reader's-pulse test is a specific protocol for measuring whether your pacing lands. You give a reader a 30-page section of your draft. They read while wearing a fitness tracker (yes, r6
- 6.1Module 6: Overview20
- 6.2Mindset Maven Test: What’s YOUR Specific Resistance to External Testing?2 Questions
- 6.3Meditation: Closing Audio: Running the Pulse Test14
- 6.4Writing Prompt: Module 630
- 6.5INSPIRATION: The First Time I Ran the Pulse Test (and What Surprised Me)15
- 6.6Companion Blog: Run the Reader’s Pulse Test. The Body Does Not Argue.10