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Cut The Curtains$197.00Add to cart
Five modules on overwriting repair. The trim pass. The “kill the modifier” exercise. The voice-preservation rule.
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Stop Describing The Curtains$19.00Add to cart
An audio about overwriting. The five tell-tale signs you’re padding. The trim pass that doesn’t strip-mine your voice.
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The Overwriting Diet Planner$37.00Add to cart
A trim-pass planner. Each spread holds a paragraph and asks “what’s the word doing here?” By the end, your draft is 15% leaner.
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The Trim Bootcamp — 3 Weeks Of Live Cutting$497.00Add to cart
Three weeks. Each writer brings overwritten passages. We trim them live. By Week 3 you can do the trim pass on yourself.
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Three Days On A Word Diet$0.00Add to cart
Three days of cutting. Day 1: kill the modifiers. Day 2: kill the doubles. Day 3: kill the throat-clearing. Your draft is 10% leaner.
