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Cut The Curtains$197.00Add to cart
Five modules on overwriting repair. The trim pass. The “kill the modifier” exercise. The voice-preservation rule.
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Emotions On Page (A Translation Course)$197.00Add to cart
Five modules on emotion-to-gesture conversion. The lookup table. The “why she felt sad” rewrite. The Maven emotion library.
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Emotions To Gesture Cohort — 3 Weeks Of Line Edits$597.00Add to cart
Three weeks of converting “she felt sad” to “she put down the fork.” Group teardowns. Each writer leaves with a personal emotion library.
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Five Days, No Emotion Words$0.00Add to cart
A challenge. Five days. No “sad,” “angry,” “happy,” “scared” allowed. By Day 5 you’ve written ten gestures that carry the load better.
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She Felt Sad (Cut It, Show Me Why)$19.00Add to cart
For the writer telling emotions. The Emotion-to-Gesture conversion. The list of emotion words to stop using on first draft.
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Show, Tell, Calibrate (The Drive-Time Edition)$19.00Add to cart
Ninety minutes on the real rule. When to show, when to tell, when to do both in the same sentence.
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Show, Tell, Calibrate (The Voice Mechanic)$247.00Add to cart
Six modules on calibration. When to slow down. When to summarize. When to layer both. Includes 30 annotated passages.
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Sometimes Just Tell Me (A Defense Of Telling)$24.00Add to cart
A counter-audio. The case for strategic telling. The fifteen moments when telling is the smarter, cleaner, kinder choice.
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Stop Describing The Curtains$19.00Add to cart
An audio about overwriting. The five tell-tale signs you’re padding. The trim pass that doesn’t strip-mine your voice.
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The Calibration Planner$37.00Add to cart
A line-level show/tell pass planner. Page per paragraph. The “is this earning the slow-down” check. The “is this earning the summary” check.
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The Emotion-Gesture Planner$37.00Add to cart
A conversion workbook. Left column: the emotion word you used. Right column: the gesture underneath. Permanent reference table at the back.
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The Overwriting Diet Planner$37.00Add to cart
A trim-pass planner. Each spread holds a paragraph and asks “what’s the word doing here?” By the end, your draft is 15% leaner.
