Continuity Cleanup (The Boring Pass That Saves Your Reputation)

You wrote a beautiful book. Your readers wrote angry reviews about the dog's name changing.

The misdiagnosisThe misdiagnosis is that continuity is for nitpickers.
The real diagnosisContinuity is for everyone. The reader who notices is the reader who loved the book enough to be paying attention. You owe them a clean draft.

Cleanup Targets

Target How To Catch Tool
Character names Search each Find/replace audit
Eye color, hair, scars Search 'eyes,' 'hair' Tag in Continuity Bible
Dates and ages Build a timeline Spreadsheet
Possessions Search the item Track scene-by-scene
Magic / tech rules Test each rule against itself Rules sheet

Three Continuity Errors Readers Catch Loudest

  • Name spellings changing.
  • Character ages that don't add up.
  • Geography that contradicts itself.

Continuity is not about being right. It is about not breaking the spell.

Do this on the second-to-last pass. Print and search.

The dare (not assignment)Pick three continuity targets above. Audit them today. Fix what you find.
Image promptA ledger with neat columns of dates and notes, a pen in the gutter. Painterly. Cream and dark blue. No people.

— The Book Maven

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